Leahweird

Exquisite piece. I really loved the line about "her cellophane skin". I don't know if that's classified as a metaphor or what but it sounds beautiful. The only thing I ...

Elves Elves are a type of fey that has developed a very physical existence. They belong to the Seelie court but have integrated extremely with the world outside of fairy ...

~Minerva~ Minerva walked sown the docks. She’d left on most of her red velvet party attire, presuming that it would be fine under a cloak, but she taken the pins ...

I come on sites like this one when I'm stuck. It helps to keep your mind away from your story, and at the same time get you back into the ...

~Minerva~ Minerva glared at the back of the man walking away from her. Well, so much for small talk. Huffing she went back to her place with the musicians hired ...

*bursts into wild applause* Beautiful, simply beautiful. I love the juxtaposition between traditional beautiful things like sunsets and hot choclate with the fresh. "Tell me about silence" gives me sh

I just saw your sonnet, so when another of your peices popped up, I had to read it. You really have a gift for language. I'm jealous. I'm not sure ...

This makes me want o read the rest of the novel. I hope you post some. The only critique I have is that it gets a little confusing regarding who ...

I was reading, and thinking "Well this is oddly written." I enjoyed it immensely, but I got to then end and had an epiphany. "Oh! It's a sonnet !." I ...

Three! Count them! Three! And ther's probably more out there! I suppose it's because fear is so iconic.I did an essay on that last year. I love the first two ...

Wow, two poems about fear in close quaters. Both very well done I must add. I have very little to contribute beyond that, though.

I have one question. WHen you say "Historical fiction" what period does that imply? Victorian or older? I'm good with anything, but it's kind of important.

Teehee. This is fun. I really like you food references. They really fit with what you trying to do. One thing though. . Her mouth was salivating like strawberry jelly ...

I'd like to start off by saying this is a really well written piece. Apparently it started out as an info dump, but i didn't get that at all. Actually ...

This is really powerful, and you’ve got a good mythology going on. I do have some notes though. For starters, you’ve given us your “Vampire mythology” straight. I don’t think ...