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Re: East of the Sun, West of the Moon
*This Story is Based on the Fairytale The Castle East of the Sun, and West of the Moon * Psyche was well known as the prettiest girl in her village. ...
Jun 21, 2008 -
Re: The Witch's Familiar
This has been completly overhauled thanks to some marvolous critiques. The old version is floating around somewhere, but i like this one better. The Witch’s Familiar Being a witch in ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Swapping Your Blood with Formaldehyde (Part 1 and 2)
I have very little to say unfortunatly. The second part scared me a litlle, but it was good. I really loved the first part. My favorite element was the switch ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Raisin Hell (1/2)
This sisn't make as much sense to me, because I haven't reas the novel. I am going to read it now. I really liked how you could tell that carl ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Martha, I'm Coming
I don't actually like the rhyme scheme for this one. I hate it when people say that to me, because it's not something you can just change. I have to ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Crazy Little Thing I
I think everyones aready sung your praises, but I had to point out one line that turned your story from awsome to stellar. I think I’d been waiting my whole ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Mid-Wife.
Question, did you ever draw the pictures to go with this? It's very powerful, even jut the way it is. You seem to have a talent for deepm slightly distirbing ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Submerged
Cold, but exhilarating, Passion, like a cold lake In the heady summer heat, Makes you shiver in the chill, And your skin feels numb, But every touch Is intensified. The ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: God Still Loves You (4)
I've finnally decided to coment, but I've read them all, and enjoyed them. I just want to say that I really love the contrast between Josie's growing feelings for nina, ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Rules of Writing (True-ish)
I've seen some of these before. I didn't know there were so many.
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: After the Angel: Eve's Story
The prompt for this is actually Apple, although the fruit itself is hardly ever mentioned. Eden is gone. My husband and I, Driven by the fiery angel, Walk into the ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Collin's Book
Collin burst out of his apartment building in a cloud of frantic energy. His usually sleek, black hair was unbearably tousled and he’d been forced to wear the same grey ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: The Dragon Knight Legacy - Chronicle of Heros
~Cassandra~ Now that she wasn't in desperate fear for her life. Cassandra could take a good look at her rescuers. They were a motly band. Only one seemed entirly human. ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: A solider's song
~Nathanial~ Winter's started at the new arrival. "Where on erarth did you come from?" He hoped the newcomer had an escape route. Right now it was looking good otherwise.
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: All The World's a Stage
~Katherine~ She smiled forlornly. It was a start. She hadn't been propelled out of the room. "Alright, come down if you feel better later. I'll make a plate of dinner ...
Jun 4, 2008
