Leahweird

Zephyr She wasn't even suposed to be here. She had no purpose on the base, nothing to be loyal too. In fact, she only snuck in to boost somew of ...

Oh, and Glitchy is an adverb. It's probably not in the dictionary, but it's a legitimate word to describe how the machine is acting. Yay for colloquial grammar!

This looks like it's going to be really awesome. I love Paradox! He reminds me of Dr. Who meets Chrstomanci, which could be really epic. I like how you had ...

Well, you've got me interested. You do have some minor problems though. Mostly with set up. It seems like you are dumping the reader right into the story. SOmetimes that ...

Jenko Jenko surpressed a growl as he glared at Haven over the fire. The interaction between Lamika and Haven was obviously quite innocent, but it still bothered him. He wasn't ...

You know you're a nerd when your displeased with your one bad testin Latin 101. Which is actually just an A rather than an A+.

You know you're a nerd when you work in a library. And you intentionally took the saturday shift, when all the non-nerds are out parting, so you can get more ...

I've only been in one serious relationship myself, but I think believing in "sappy" ideas is important. Part of falling in love is finding what it is that inspired all ...

Your user name includes the word "weird"partly because that is the adjective that suits you best. And you are proud of that fact.

I'm glad you like it! I agree with your comments about my pacing. It's one of the things I have problems with on a regular basis. But practice make perfect, ...

Jenko "Yes, we'll want to get it cooking as quickly as possible." A nice roast would be perfect on night that was rapidlly growing colder. It was lucky that Wyverus ...

Jenko "Hey," he replied. "Looks like you had some success." Jenko was extremly glad that Wyverrus had joined their quest. He had some incredibly useful skills. And it was really ...

Hmmm. How to begin? It looks like we are already aquainted and on our way. I'm going to start us of as we're making camp for the evening, a few ...

I really liked this piece, but it has some problems, mostly with pacing. Your trying to shove teh entire process of falling in love into a very small space. I ...

The first paragraph confused me. Hasn't it only been a few weeks since Delilah's accident? Camden implied she hadn't been to school for years. You need to be extra careful ...