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Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)
Jenko He was very glad that the Necromancer had enhanced the makeshift weopon, because it was only moments later when Jenko had to fend off a soldier trying to ride ...
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Re: Greek Vs. Roman Camp
I'm slightly obsessed with mythology in general, but Greek and Roman in particular. If a storybook like this turned up, I would be in. Would it be very much like ...
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Re: I Am A Dragon
I like the idea of this poem, but not the exectution. The repitiotion did not work for you in this instance. You have such beautiful imagry going on, though.
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Le Morte d’Arthur
I am a huge king Arthur man girl, so of course I had to read this. I think you did a really good job of interpreting the story in your ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)
Jenko Unsuccesful in dealing with Godric, Jenko was steeling himself to return to the fire. Even if it did mean watching Lamika and Haven flirting. But then Pelleas burst through ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: In the Glass Part 1
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Yes this is part of the fairytale phase I seem to be going through, so it is a retelling. Which one it is will ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Flesh vs Steel (Started)
Zephyr She wanted to tell Mercury where to go. Who was he to boss them around like that? BUt like it or not his plan was the first one to ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: In the Glass Part 1
The prince thought the evening of his twenty-first birthday was turning into one of the best nights of his life. Being the only child of royalty, his coming of age ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Paradox
Chrestomanci is the title character of a book series by Dianna Wynn Jones (the late, British Grand Dame of Speculative Fiction). Like the Doctor he is famous for eccentiricity, style, ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Infractus Iudicium: Part Two
Forgot to mention, the length you have here is good. I personally find it harder to read online, so it's okay to have shorter chapters. SHorter things are also way ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Infractus Iudicium: Part Two
Yay, a title! I enjoyed this second chapter, but there are a couple things I wanted mention. The room was rather a small house spelled so the inside was large ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Black Pendragon Chapter 2
I'm so glad you like it! I fixed that mistake. I think I tried to edit that line too much and it got jumbled. Also I added another chapter if ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Black Pendragon Chapter 3
I want to make it clear; I did not make up this part of the legend. I included it because one of my reasons for writing Black Pendragon is to ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)
Jenko Obiously the little man was lying. Perhaps he was just in a bad mood, like Jenko himself was.If that was the case, there was nothing to be done. But ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Flesh vs Steel (Started)
Zephyr Zephyr looked at the little girl clasped in father's arms. The kid reminded her too much of Carver, and the way he had gripped her knees, begging her not ...
Oct 17, 2011
