Leahweird

Then one day someone else opened the curtain. At first he thought Narissa had just taken another form. She had done so in the past. But this girl was obviously ...

Awesome!

You might want to reconsider then. I can't remember the Greek term, but "shield buddies" is euphamism. While in Phalanx formation, your shield is actually supposed to cover the guy ...

As long as you now what that means ;)

Oh, sorry. I didn't see that. I'm actually okay with that, because I'm not sure of my ability to play a truely cunning character anyway. Can I switch to endurance? ...

That's what it sounded like but I wanted to be sure. Here goes. Name: Delphine Age: 20 Gender: Male Appearance: Arête: Endurance Personality: Delphine only just avoided being exposed as ...

I seem to be plauged by the same editing problems; typos and commas. &@#$ commas. Anyway thank you so much for catching those. I'm so glad you liked it, and ...

At first he tried to escape. He spent what felt like days trying to break the glass and free himself, but it was impossible. He wasn’t corporeal anymore. Next he ...

I started univerity way back in 2008, and abrubtly dropped of the face of the univerese. Now I have a little more breathing room, so I have returned. Actually, I ...

Do you want us to PM profiles right away? Or only after all the spots have been taken?

A couple nitpicks. This line, The corsets had gotten tighter, of which many have assured her are the current fashion. struggles to make sense. I think thers an issue in ...

I guess this portion is a bit of a "breather episode." The content isn't as dark, and it's much shorter. It cuts off abruptly because I continued into the next ...

Thank you for your review! I will try and expand my paragraphs in the future. I have terrible difficulty with my pacing, and that might help. I don’t suppose you ...

Thought so. Sounds fine to me.

Zephyr She didn't want to be "the girl" on the team, but creeping through the darkness, she found herself reaching for the hand of the person beside her. It didn't ...