Leahweird

Jenko Jenko huffed in frustration as the necromancer dissapeared. He would have to wait yet again to talk to his friend. "Keep moving foreward," he said to the perplexed group. ...

Thanks for cathing that typo! It should have been "years", I fixed that now. I'm so glad you're enjoying this. Hoefully I will have the next part up soon. I ...

Zephyr Logan was freaking out. Obviously he had some problem with small spaces, but Zephyr was finally in her element. Creeping around in the dark was something she could deal ...

Zephyr Zephyr was feeling a little proud of herself for actually taking out one of the SICADS, but the feeling abandoned her when the new machine appeared. There was no ...

Jenko It looked like his apology would have to wait. Poor Wyverus was busy fending of Lamika. At least his sister would keep the necromancer from getting to far ahead ...

I liked Kaye alot. He remined me of a pooka. That might not be what you were going for, but my mind is wired for pookas. I'm not to keen ...

10/10 She looks mysterious somehow...

Oooh this looks like it has some potential. I like how you introduced the eye-colour=power thing by having Azure tease the guards. It tells us about the world and the ...

This is very entertaining! I think you've highlighted a lot of what we go through in the creative process. It's far too easy to get distracted and discouraged, until it ...

When I was seventeen, King Mark’s Nephew Tristan died. Years ago, the boy had tried to run off with his uncle’s wife, Isolde. The lovers were found, and Tristan was ...

I want to throw a nitpick in there. You use the word 'might' to describe both Ithirica and the three kingdoms to the east. Obviously an unimportant detail, but it ...

Hello! I am in the process of creeping all your stuff, and I have a tendency to "like" everything that enjoy. I wanted to let you know that I especially ...

Jenko Jenko stood shaken. What had he been thinking? Wyverus was his best friend, but he had let his temper flare so much that he hadn’t even seen how much ...

This poem is obviously expressing some very powerful emotions. I'm going to bring up my archnemises "show vs. tell",because this poem is comprised almost entirly of the latter. This might ...

Jenko Everything that had been bothering him suddenly came lurching to the surface. Firego’s blatant disregard for what kind of trouble they had gotten themselves into. Lamika’s flirting. Losing a