Leahweird

Jenko He quickly regreted following taur into the bar. He wasn't a small man, and he'd been in his share of fistfights, but this was obviously a much tougher crowd. ...

I liked how you're working harder at making the narrators different. I also thought that comparing enya to a dragon was genious. Very thematically appropriate. One actual criticism. You keep ...

I forgot to say! I really enjoyed the story itself. Very mysterious and whimsical.

Rule of thumb for paragraphs, start a new one everytime you have a new thought, like a change in who is speaking or what is being addressed. Do this even ...

Jenko Jenko shrugged of his pack and dug out their little purse. They didn't have a lot of actual money, and they stll needed to by supplies, but this might ...

Zephyr "Wait," said Zephyr, as they approached to tunnel entrance. "Is the digger still there?" Carefully, she help Cancer slide down against the wall so he could sit for a ...

I agree that staying interested in a project long enough to finish it is a problem. There are some things you can do to keep yourself motivated though. As mentioned ...

When life gets you down, make a comforter - bo burnham 42.3 persecent of statistics are made up on the spot Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you ...

I'm dealing with the same situation in a story I'm writing. When you think about it, the apple kind of comes out of nowhere. I've decided I'm going to combine ...

This piece reminds me of a cautionary tale and a history lesson. I loved it. It was really interesting to read, even though it was mostly just an overveiw of ...

Jenko "Truthfully I have no idea," said Jenko. "It can't be too far though. Wyverus might be mad, but he wouldn't invite us to come to somplace very far out ...

Thank you for the compliment. I don't know if this will be a book persay, we'll see how long it gets. I'm not sure if it has a meesage or ...

I spent a lot of time wondering about the setting and the main character, so you might want to rework this to make such things more obvious. That said, I ...

Terrorizing the populace had put Narissa in a ridiculously good mood. She was practically singing as she combed out her long red hair. Her current look was very similar to ...

Name: Ray Gender: Depends. Race: Wenyewe (When-yay-way) A species with no corporeal form that can take on any physical shape, the Wenyewe survive by mimicking what they encounter. Usually they ...