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Dorian Scale “Now that’s more like it!” Dorian Exclaimed. “Pretty soon I’ll have My Lady sounding as majestic as she ought.” Judging from his expression, Earl didn’t seem to appreciate ...

Jenko Jenko sighed when the necromacer seemed to have gone off to do his own thing. He had wanted to talk to the group as a whole. He wasn't to ...

Just a few nitpicks. And did the plant of good flower on such barren land?Like a poppy from the battlefield. And did the spores of evil fruit in such a ...

Camelot was beautiful, on the outside at least. The immense castle dominated the landscape, built entirely of white stone and decorated with the Pendragon banners. It was like something pulled ...

This was very well written, as usual. I've may have said this befre, but I love the tension between Key and Chess. She seems so jealous of Josh! It's kind ...

Jenko Jenko continued to glare at the necromancer as they walked quickly away from the scene. It wasn't realy safe to be in the area anymoe. Even if this town ...

I think that sounds realy cool. Dusk state sounds like a really interesting spin on something slightly mythological, which I love. Dreamwalking is traditionally dangerous in a couple of ways. ...

Magicians Nephew is just part of a long tradition of fantasy liturature. Apples show up in other fairtales/myths. The one that springs to mind in the tree of golden apples ...

Narissa did not act on his information right away. In fact, she seemed to being planning another prolonged absence. He didn’t find this reassuring, though. He knew she was just ...

RachaelElg seems to have answered the question already. It really does depend on what kind of writers block you have. Stuckness is a problem I struggle with, so a thought ...

I think the danger of being repetitive come from the use of "my love" and "darling". Everything else seems fine, but these two phrases seem overused somehow. Otherwise this is ...

Jenko At first he was anxious to see a gaurd approaching, but then he saw Firego talking to him and he relaxed. The boy was absolutly legendary at talking his ...

Critiques are important, but it's just as good to know when you've done something right, and hearing that is certainly better for your self esteem. :)

That sounds like such a good story! Anyways, it sounds to me like you need to add another character to be Gwyns prince. Maybe combine the elements? Have him be ...

Name: Dorian Scale Age: 20 Appearance: Bit of a fop. Skills: Bardic magic. Kinda. Bio: It can be said that Dorian has a gift for music. It would be more ...