Leahweird

This is a good start, you are having some issues though. For one thing, you tense is fluctuating wildly. I think this is mostly caused by you starting as if ...

I really like these. All of them. You aren't kidding about the Super Duper Poet thing. I do think, how ever, that the one poem Do Flowers Grow on Trees ...

Name: Lauren Monroei] Age: [i]22 Role: Sin, Greed Abilities: Can momentarily steal other peoples powers, but only one at a time History: You'd think growing up in the lap of ...

Jenko He breathed a sigh of relief. While he didn't want anyone to be forced to stay, he had been hoping they all would choose too. He really didn't think ...

Narissa was waiting for him to return. “Where have you been?” She demanded. “I haven’t been anywhere. Where could I go?” He was amazed he could say as much. While ...

This is so beautiful. Your theme is haunting. I'm in love with your rhyme scheme. It seems so delicate, and it perfectly complements what you are trying to say, rather ...

9/10 Cheers!

This is a good start to a story. I like how you can tell a lot about the family from their interection. I would say though, that it's not really ...

I really liked this piece! It was unique, and I think you were ight to put it in fantasy. However, I do have one critique. Your opening lines seem very ...

I'm in. I just needed to make sure I would actually be around that day. Look like asunday, so I should be free.

This is a really well written piece. I love your description. "the matches were lit at my cheeks" is just one of the fascinating ways you found to relate things. ...

I can see you posted this a little while ago, but I wanted to say that I liked this. You need to break up the paragrapgmore though. Reading on a ...

I was going to mention Orson Scott Card's bok, but it's on here already. I don't consider him the be all end all of writers, but his book is really ...

This sounds very interesting, not to mention different. I do have one recommendation however. One of the rules of fantasy world building is "don't call a rabit a smeerp", meaning: ...

Dorian Dorian was indeed miserable. Nothing was turning out as it should. How was he supposed to work on his opus in conditions like this? I would take a lot ...