Leahweird

10/10 Rainbow Zebra!

Knowing what turned out well is just as important as hearing what didn't. Thank you for the ego boost!

“You know where she is, don’t you?” He was surprised to hear Narissa’s voice. She hadn’t been speaking to him for days. “Is your magic not working?” “I can’t find ...

Took Bio for Octavian down. Sorry about the confusion. Lucius is lonely now though.

“Mirror? Mirror, are you there?” “Snow?” “What happened to your eye? It’s cracked!” “Your stepmother and I had an altercation. I think I won.” “But she hurt you!” “She’s neve

You have made me very happy. It seems I have managed to get my point across even with just this one chapter. I think that means that the character I've ...

Name: Lucius (Luc to his friends) Age: 20 Gender: Male Rank Illegitimate Son (Calls himself a prince) Allegiance: Mostly himself, but he cares about Ithirica Appearance: Luc is tall and ...

I actually really liked the flow of this, right up until the last stanza. I'm not entirly sure what's wrong with it though. (So helpful I know). I like the ...

I just got done writing a review in which I stated I don't scare easily, but this was seriously creeping. You have a masterful skill for using the Show Don't ...

I actually really enjoyed reading this! I didn't realize until afterward that it was a contest entry, and had specific reasons for choosing things. I guess it's kinf od like ...

Unfortunately I had neglected to bring a change of clothing that wasn’t black. I liked that shade, but I had planned to meet my father for the first time in ...

That happens to me quite a lot. I'm not sure why it does that, or how to stop it. I always thought it had something to do with my copying ...

I intend to join. I'm just waiting for character inspiration to strike.

Why is she out in the snow in a sundress? These are the kinds of questions that hook me right away. The fact that this one never does get answered ...

This needs to be put into paragraphs in the worst way. Something like this on paper might work, but the internet maked things harder to read,and huge chunks of text ...