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Re: The Conversation of Cats
He knew she was a girl. It was just weird for him because he didn't really think of her as having a gender. That's why she's so so unimpressed with ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: The Conversation of Cats
“I’m hungry,” announced the cat. Tom just continued sweeping. He knew better than to take this statement at face value. The small pumpkin tabby began to swirl around his legs. ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: The Red Cloak
Wow. Bad day for errors on my part. Some of those mistakes almost ruin the whole sentence. Thank you so much for finding those! You also caught some things I ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: The Red Cloak
A cookie if you can guess what famous fairytale this is. I'll give you a hint; it takes place years after the events of the actual story Twilight tinted the ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Apprentice Wars DT
Posting for updates :)
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Copy Copy
It does get confusing sometimes whether Mary or Maria is doing the action. It also seems really sudden. Deciding to kill another person and never go home again is a ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Drallion DT
I would be okay with that, but it would take some collaboration. We're in the middle of creating a consistent back story for us all.
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Apprentice Wars **Permission Only**
But of course. I just wanted to keep things moving with the promise of another person.
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Apprentice Wars **Permission Only**
I intend to audition. I'm just waiting until I get a good idea for a character.
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Supreme Team; Rise of Pyro Flame Chapter 3
I have a couple nitpicks. There are a couple typos (a Y in many, a D is god) and you seem to repeat the phrase "a grat deal of power" ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)
Jenko Jenko frowned when Taur and Wyverrus went out into the hall, but Firego kept him from following. “You can’t control everything that happens within the group,” said the younger ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Nightmare Smiths
Here's a link, please check us out!
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Baby Dragon
I don't really have much to say about this piece as of yet, but i wanted to say that I really liked how you told us about the world you've ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Drallion DT
Addie is adorable. I'm not entirly sure what our family history is, but it sounds like the King has some issues.
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: In the Glass Part 5
:) Thank you for your lovely comments, and for catching those errors. That missing word is kind of important, isn't it? That's fixed now.
Nov 4, 2011
