Leahweird

There. I've introduced my two characters. Now I can sit back and wait for everyone else to have a turn.

Sebastian Sebastian looked at the card in his hand. “We have to get a tattoo?” he murmured. “Don’t be a baby,” said his sister, correctly guessing that he had been ...

Serena “I don’t suppose I can talk you out of this.” Serena turned to her brother, brushing a strand of inky hair out of her face. She grinned at him. ...

*runs to the other board*

I can go post now then?

Awesome *dances*

I think we might still be waiting for some people. Are we still starting today?

"Well, if you insist," said Cat. "You say that like we actually live here," Tom pointed out, earning himself a glare from his companion. "We're just exploring," she explained. "It's ...

Thanks for catching those errors, escpecially that missing line. The joke is ruined without it. Pacing is probably my biggest issue as a writer, I'm still trying to get better ...

“What kind of wizard doesn’t have any magical stuff with him?” Tom did regret his lack of possessions. The fact that he couldn’t claim ownership to anything other than the ...

This is a cool story, but it's skipping along too fast. You're jumping into the main plot before we really know whats going on. It think this is because you ...

Good. I did intend for them both to survive. Although, It might be interesting if Sebastion lost Serena somehow.

Just out of curiosity, what is the end result of the games supposed to be? I mean if only there is one ultimate winner that's fine, but only if it's ...

This is a really cool piece. I hope it's the startof something. I love how you used colour to set the tone. Under a full moon on top of a ...

You have captured a real moment here. I know that girl, the blond one. In fact I knoe several. They seem to be everywhere. Anyone who has participated in the ...