Leahweird

Having read a little bit of the book inquestion, I can say this definitely sets the right tone. Plus it's so gorgeous!

She was walking through the woods, and she heard the wolf approaching. She wasn’t afraid at first; all she had to do was go back to the village. Yet she ...

Me again! One of my favourite authors gave the advise "start where the story is." Meaning you should start the first scene right where things start to happen for the ...

I like to think that I am influenced by all my favourite writers, but the book that seems to actually influence my writing visibly is The Last Unicorn by Peter ...

I think there is a fine, fine, line between cocky, prideful characters (who are awesome) and outright jerks. It must be tricky to right, but I'm sure it can be ...

Pretty much anything ever written is in danger of becoming a bad copy of something else. It's true, paranomal and science fiction are particularly tricky genres, but that's what makes ...

Sebastian I felt the elation of the first person to find the door. Then there was a sense of confusion, and the person I was “listening” to disappeared. That was ...

I've actually been told to tone down my use of disctinctive prose. I tend to use complicated words, and sometimes that stops people from knowing what I mean. Also, if ...

While the men made their way up to her, Marguerite obliterated the few tell-tale tracks the wolf left behind, and hid the evidence of her encounter under her cloak. She ...

Victor made me laugh. "takes all the flavour out of the blood" *snicker* Werewoles FTW! I was just about to ask for more details about Esme, and then she gave ...

My pleasure! This is a common issue when working with fantasy genre, but definitely forge ahead for now. I want to read what happens next!

Very mysterious. I just love the mood you set. You have a really good use of language. One thing I would say is that you need to start new paragraphs ...

Ray I heard someone grumble about not actually being fed. I didn’t mind, but actual nourishment wasn’t required for my survival. I liked to eat though, when I had the ...

My pleasure! You looked like you needed someone to round out the council.

Name- Joan Aquarius Age- 475 Gender- Female Appearance- Sorry if the picture is a little risqué, it was just so perfect in every other respect Personality- Gentle, somewhat maternal. Joan ...