Leahweird

You haven't posted anything in a while, and i have missed your writing. This chapter shows off why. The moments you've created are so real. And the contrast between the ...

Ray I raced to obey Aramanda's command as quickly as possible. Soon I retuned with a container of icy water, although I did not know what she needed it for. ...

I'm honestly shocked that we haven't got a batman yet.

Argh! Again with the missing words. It's an affliction. Thank you very much for catching those. As for Fleurine, I think this scene shows off the huge difference between the ...

Oh it's awesome that he's a necromancer. I just meant that he deals with some of the same things (thirst that relys on the death of others, immortality) in an ...

Lucius has surfaced in my mind. He has requested that I let Sunshine know that he thinks Basille is incredibly attractive. So take that as you will.

Freki ended up falling asleep in her lap. It made her wonder whether he actually had gone home the night before. She had assumed that was where he went, but ...

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. Espiecially those who took the time to point out my errors. You have no idea how much I apprieciate having people read my ...

Umbrim reminds me of the oldschool, pre-romanticized vampires. He's got that edge to him.I loved the discussion with his "fan".

Ray There didn't seem to be many tasks for me today. So I slunk down to the engine room. Hanging back, I paused to admire the way Aramanda threw herself ...

The wolf paused at the threshold of the little house at the edge of town. “I haven’t been in someone’s home for years. Are you sure this is alright?” “Don’t ...

Oh snap! Ha ha, I love all the shots you took at modern teen fiction. If they are really getting sucked into that book, I think we readers are about ...

I find that after a certain number of people die, I just stop caring. The death itself looses impact, and it becomes difficult to become attached to characters when you ...

Guinevere opened the door and entered his room You dodn't need to say that she opened the door. It is implied her entering the room. let no doubts she was ...

What a wonderful story! Your pacing was good, your descriptions were enchanting, and I utterly adored your depiction of a girl in love. You are right though, in that it ...