Leahweird

Or the opposite, haveing the Bat get his but kicked everytime he comes up against one of us.

You know, it might actually be interesting if Batman himself is not a playable character. We just get this mysterious character who we never find anything about. Kind of appropriate ...

Since his letter of introductio seems to be missing at the moment (as far as he knows), Luc will probably not admit the real reason for his mission until after ...

(ooc: Bethany, I think you mixed up the princes. As far as I know Ben is back in Ithirica.  Luc is in Sunuma as his brother’s proxy. Lucius Luc ...

I approve of the name choice ;) Anyways, I didn't see any errors. I loved the scene by the pool. I think it has shade of the frog prince, which ...

I've just posted for my two characters. Let me know if I ever step on anyone's toes. I wrote them both in third person POV, but I can switch if ...

Darrion As the sun streamed through the window of his bedroom, Dary moaned and pulled the covers over his head. He was fully prepared to fight his way back to ...

Lucius Riding alongside his retinue, Luc contemplated their imminent arrival at the palace of Sunuma. He really hoped he wouldn’t be turned away at the gate. His father’s letter of ...

How odd. Because I can see the picture, and that's Jonathan Crane from Batman Begins! (Love him). What an appropriate choice given the goings on over in the Storybook forum. ...

I know I tend to love all of your poetry, but I esspeicially liked this one. You can almost feel the sense of elation just by reading the words.

“Don’t worry I’m not going to get catch.” You have a catch instead of a caught "She’s probably just wait of a free guy, such as my self, to come ...

Cat stood with her arms folded over her chest, tapping her foot while she waited for Tom to compose himself. He took several deep breaths and tried to tell himself ...

Ray I hesitated. I didn't think I would be much help. But Aramanda wanted my assistance, and that was good. And if the engines really needed replacing, it was my ...

“Oi lady you alright mate” Are you missing an extra D here? "In England but I must have been" This doesn't make sense. Are you missing words? This seamt way ...

I think you misspelled "buick" and "sigh" in the last paragraph before the break. Otherwise I have no comments, except to point out your awesomeness.