Layleun

Thank god everything's back. I was gonna go into withdrawal because it seemed like I hadn't been on in forever! Nice to see ya back Nate. **Lupe**

With the Fourth of July coming up and all I was wondering something. Do other countries besides the US celebrate the Fourth of July? I know it's an American holiday ...

Black, Butterfly, Stingshine, Bluebarrel, Kail, Redwing, and Sabra crouched on the roof of the attack point. Each of them held a grenade strap, and their specialty weapons. Blackwalker paced around ...

I see a lot of people write in first person and do well when writing like that and some people don't do as good. When writing in 1st it's always ...

Naruto

Black signaled to her pack to bury the boys body. Such a pest, she thought to herself. Butterfly killed him quietly by breaking his chestbone and sending it to his ...

Black raced after the boys, Butterfly and Bluebarrel on her tail. Blackwalker glimpsed Butterflys rusty snout to her right, "I'll take care of them." Black rolled her eyes, so like ...

Deathly silence spread over the fighting wolves. Black kept her switchblade at her side. Butterfly, who was talking to Bluebarrel and Terkeno, stood. Her sky blue eyes observed the scene. ...

Black noticed the girl Terkeno seemed to be scared out of her mind. Blackwalker cleared her throat. Bluebarrel, a brawny blonde, looked at Black from across the fire. She flicked ...

Ok, just to let everyone know, I'm changing Black's Were looks. If anyone has the time I'd appreciate it if you could check out the changes.

Black took a gigantic mouthful of meat in her mouth. She gnawed on it with her molars and licked her lips. She glanced around the camp area. Her pack and ...

Good idea. Tenses are a big issue here. If anything I would use past tense like was, walked, ran, etc. The intro below is the same thing just with all ...

Blackwalker shook her head like a dog would, she would never underestimate a human looking Were again. She held her head up high, "My name is Blackwalker, leader of the ...

Black was sleeping, thinking of what she was going to do with Lethero. She was abruptly awoken by the sound of a shot going off, a scream followed shortly after. ...

Well, like Clau said, it doesn't make sense to stupid people like myself. I don't get it, to me it just looks like a quote =( Lo siento