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Re: DELETED
Hi! uuum there's just a few things I would like to point out... Okayy. well in the beginning you started talking about more of her family than herself. Not a ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: Forever
Forever By:Layla A loud knock on our front door awakes me. I look to my left to see the time on my alarm clock.It's 3:47 a.m. In the other room, ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: Back to Square One. (1)
I like this piece. Send me a PM when you post the second part of it please!! But anyways I'm a little confused..did she kill him or is she just ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: Bruises
Bruises By:Layla :D :D :D :D :D PROLOGUE I toss and turn while I try to go to sleep. I feel so much guilt for not telling the conselor the ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: Please Listen
Please Listen I feel I'm not good enough to be called your daughter. You say I must do better, to succeed, to be successful. But I don't know what to ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: -Deleted-
Well other people ahve told you the corrections you might want to make so i'll just tell you what i thik. so what im getting out of this is you ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: -Deleted-
its still good a song and a poem. whatever you want it to be. it stills send out that message you're trying to get out there. its beautiful.
May 9, 2009 -
Re: A Family Affair
That was a great story. Very. . . very touchy. I hope you write more to this story.
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: One Last Goodbye
wow. thats sad. was she a good friend or is this just made up? overall beautiful. Not really in a poem form but it still works.
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Daddy, I love you
AAAAAAAAAAAAw that poem is sooo pretty. in the first line the word "in" i dont think is needd. in the second stanza when its like "as i hide in your ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: You think you know her
Wow. That is EXACTLY how i feel inside. EXACTLY. that was a totally amazing poem.
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: Paulina-My Best Friend
I wrote this for my best friend a few days ago hecka randomly. We're going to different schools next year and we dont know how we're going to survive because ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: Sweet Tears, and Chaos. Part 1 of Chapter 1.
Thats kool. no rush or anything but hurry up and write the rest!!!!!!it looks soooo interesting. Do they fall in love?? No dont tell me...it'll ruin the story.Can you send ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: It's the things you don't hear...
that was a cool little story. pretty koo pretty koo. write more!!
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Two Friends, Two Lives, One Secret
SORRY THERE'S A FEW ERRORS, I KNOW BUT I WAS IN A RUSH SO YEA. PART 2 Julia sat in her history class dying of boredom. Bu it was her ...
Apr 4, 2009