Layla

At the end of the names ate little things lime this *. Those are the names I changed to protect my friend. Thank you and enjoy. When I was in ...

I know you're probably tired of peope having pity for you, but I am so sorry this happened to you and your sister. This should never happen to anybody and ...

Hi I'm Layla.! I liked this piece but I just want to point out a few things. The signal what does it say, I'm not the best person with grammar ...

I know this isn't poetry okayy. So I get it now. It's supposed to be fictional or whatever so ya. " 'Perfect I walk by you as you pass by ...

Two words;LOVE IT.!!! You are simply a wonderful writer.

Hello i'm Layla.! I like you poem first off. It wouldve been great if you wouldve added more to it and gave it more emotion. But overall great.

Forever(part 2) By:Layla guys i totally hate this piece and was on the phone while writing this. so I'm going to rewrite.(DONT WASTE YOUR TIME READING ALL. THE STORY WILL ...

I like how you wrothe it in first person. it wouldnt make sense in third. But anyways, the ending part when she was going throught the stuff of what she ...

No it isn't about me and her. It sort've is but it isn't

How is everyone's life in this story?? Hahaha. I liked it tho and i actually wanted to read it because it was short. You should finish it asap and then ...

Hey guys! YWS has helped me and my writing a LOT, thanks to my new friends and all the editors. Thank you so much! I'm also somewhat new to YWS ...

I love how your writing isn't like the others and how it's not abstract in a way. It's straightforward, and perfect, to a T!! I also like how you put ...

I like how you chose this form of poetry and i like the beginning. But you might want to space it out a bit so it's easier to read and ...

I love this!! It's beautifully written. I love how you made their love sound suspenseful and dangerous. It seems like their love will last forever...

I like your start. You should put just a little more detail. And at the end you should put something mysterious hat would make your readers anxious to read your ...