Layla

Yes, I absolutely agree with stelagineva. You might want to name this The Emptiness, or Changes, or The Nothingness. I don't know. I have THOUSANDS of titles I could give ...

Thank you Hannah, for your review. And no, I have not, ever, written rhyming poem. All my others are not rhyming because Its hard.

Kanen, forbidden love sucks ass huh?? Lol. But best friends like you and her usually get married or something in the end, so don't give up,okayy?? She'll wake up one ...

Hello! Layla here, and I'm going to review your poem and give you tips, then my opinion. Some days are good, Some days are bad, Somedays make you think about ...

Hello!! I'm Layla, I really like this. It's very unique actually. Okayy, on to the review. Uuum, despite the very powerful message in this poem, it's just a little bit ...

Hi!! Well I see I'm the first reviewer..... This is really good. It makes me feel hella bad. But I hthink grateful is supposed to be spelled greatful. I'm pretty ...

I'm sorry I hadn't noticed it before, the way you loved me and opened that door.  I was blinde to the way you held me close, I got so caught up with myself and became 

Just a little short story about MY Valentine's Day. I look past you as we dance and I lay my head on your shoulder. I see all the blurry faces ...

Hello! Layla here! First off, I love your theme. Secondly, this is awesome! There's no grammar corrections necessary. But the ending part was a little confusing when he asks her ...

Whatever. Even for a newbie, you're still good. Don't change anything, just make you're corrections for grammar. I know TheNewHero is just trying to be helpful, but leave it how ...

Yeah. I agree with EpsonBelenus. You're really good too. I never would imagine your 14. Aaanyways, this brings up a good point about society nowadays. There's nothing grammaticaly wrong with ...

Hi. I'm Layla. I liked your Poem it was really cool, but I just want to point out a few things. In the first verse you go from describing in ...

**I REWROTE ALL OF THIS** Ugh, why do I have first period p.e.?! "I want to see you sweating! Your chest should almost be touching the ground!" says Mrs. Haayes.  Go ...

I really really like this. I love the format you used for this and there aren't any grammar issues. But you kind of lost me on the story you're trying ...

Borntobeawriter pointed out all the grammer for yah. So I'm just going to tell you what I think... I really really love how you write. I know I already asked ...