Layla

hi, well for starters, I like this. But the structure is what irritates me the most. When she talks, my heart it stops Her voice is a treasure, Her presence ...

thank you, you guys. :) I'm glad you like it. I'll make those edits, too.

You're the reason why my skins so familiar with the breathe of the blade, the stinging slice of each incision, the taste of the drooling stitch. Do you really know ...

Ok hi!:) I like this poem alot. But it's a little hard to find the whole point of this. The very last stanza is phenominal! The adjectives you use are ...

^^she said exactly what I would have said

Ok quick reply until later! Uum I liked this. Great format. Loved the way you wrote it. I'll give you more detail later, my iPods goons to die, an that's ...

Hahaha Layla by Eric Clapton is on my iPod:-P. So I know what you're talkig about, Snoink

Tori1234....yes it is :)

Jeez!! You don't have to be THAT harsh perdido!! Don't just yell at him like that! He doesn't know,, give him a chance

I wrote this with inspiration from the songs; Critical Acclaim by Avenged Sevenfold, The Guillotine by Escape the Fate, Gunslinger by Avenged Sevenfold, Headtsrong by Trapt, One by Metallica, Pictures

Sorry, but I have to disagree with the other editors... This is definitley beautiful. Your mother will love this. If I was a mother, I would definitely have tears of ...

Hey it's Layla. I liked this and the message you're trying to get out, but it's so SHORT. Try to extend it a little bit more. Are you familiar of ...

Helloo :P well..before I start....thank you for that LOVELY PM you sent me. :? Buuuuut... Honestly,if this guy has gotten big from writing this story, then there must not have ...

Hey! This is more of a song, don't you think?? Especially because of that one repetitive stanza.

Lol.....I don't get it..... It was cute though