LaurynMitchell

This is a very nice, solid piece of writing. It left me wanting to know more about the characters and why they're dueling. As some others pointed out, you could ...

I shivered and looked behind me. What had once been a pure layer of snow was now a bloody mess of broken snow and messy footprints. I winced and glanced ...

To Sporky: Nice to meet you! :D No, I've never heard of Taylor Mali. I'll have to look into him ;) I love finding new poets/authors to follow. As for ...

This is a good poem. I really like the rhythm and how smoothly it reads. I did have to read through it a couple of times before I felt like ...

Hi everyone! I'm Lauryn and I'm a 19 year-old college student. I'm studying to become a high school English teacher. I stumbled upon YWS while looking for writing resources online. ...