Laurenh6

Also , it's not a short story - it's just a chapter :)

Thank you for the advice! I'll definitely make some changes :)

Thank you for the advice! I'll definitely make some changes :)

Yeahh sure thing I'll give it a read :)

Thank you so much! Really means a lot :D , thanks!

I'll correct some stuff

Right ok thank you for the review - by the way the anonymous source was someone from Thailand that I know :P . Maybe I should have put that but ...

Thank you :)

Thank you :)

Sorry, I didn't realise all that, sorry if you're offended or anything . I just thought it was wrong, I asked someone from Thailand about it and that's the reasons ...

Thanks for the review! I'll take on board what you've said :)

Thanks for the review! Just wanted to get my point across about it :P - totally unfair. I'll definitely check out that programme

No worries , anytime :)

Okeyyy thanks :D

Wow thank you for the review ! This is really helpful :) .. The thing about the mother being abusive and not showing any sign of humanity .. I was ...