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Re: Light and Shadow - Prologue and Chapter 1
Hey Whisperer! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! :) I've reviewed this chapter for you before, and it seems I don't have much different to say from my first ...
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Re: Chapt 1:Not after everything we'd shared..
Hey Kakagirl! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's a review! :) Unable to see him I turned back to the rampage of books that was my looker . ...
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Re: That Which Has No Beginning Chapter 1
Hey RinSuru! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's a thanks-for-entering review! :) If one were to build up the courage to peer through any opening inside ...
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Re: The Cave Between Lands, Chapter One
Hey Kafkaescence! Thanks so much for entering my contest! Here's a thanks-for-entering review! :) I hear the Sorina's slender shadow murmur to me. I feel like that "the" isn't supposed ...
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Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S Ch. 1
Hey MilkNCookies! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's a thanks-for-entering review! :) Alright, there are a few bigger things going on in this chapter that I'd ...
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Re: My Guardian Dog - Rewritten!
Hey Tanya! Thanks for entering my contest! Here's your thanks-for-entering review. ;) I only skimmed some of the previous reviews (you have a lot there! ;)), so pardon me if ...
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Re: Annabel in Neverland - Chapter One
Hey BlueAfrica! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's a thanks-for-enetering review! A shooting star that Matt saw out the window of his apartment. I would rephrase this to ...
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Re: 27 - Prologue
Hey Jenth! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's your thanks-for-entering review! I really enjoyed this chapter! (Well, prologue haha). Prologue's are a little bit different from first
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Re: Stop and Stare (Part 2)
This is a review over both parts of Chapter One Hey Skins! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's a thanks-for-entering review! :) I shuffled away from ...
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Re: Into the Depths. 1
Hey Eli! Thanks so much for entering my contest! Here's your thanks-for-entering review! :D However, as she lay there, she found herself not being able to drift back into sleep. ...
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Re: The Masquerader Chapter 1
Hey Meg! Thanks for entering my contest! Here's your complimentary, thanks-for-entering review! Also, I went ahead and judged your chapter looking at both part 1 and part 2 of chapter ...
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Re: First chapter contest (Harriet)
Hey there Dudette! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's a thanks-for-entering review! “You want me to go alone?” Cassie looked scandalised; her arms folded tightly over her blouse
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Re: Library Love Games (The Novel ch.1)
Hey LittlePrincess! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's your thanks-for-entering review :) She shelved meticulously, an easy task, allowing her mind to wander. She thought back to hi
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Re: Zadar: Chaper One
Hey Emmy! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's your thanks-for-entering review you were promised :) The frustration overwhelmed me, leading me to curl my fist and punch the ...
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Re: Shadow of the Dawn
Hey WaitingForLife! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's your thanks-for-entering review! :) The heat crept through the soles of my boots, the faint odor of burning rubber lingering ...
Mar 15, 2011