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Hey Cspr! You don't have any reviews yet! :O Let me fix that ;) Red will be nitpick edits. Blue will be comments. Love had taken in the gated cemetery, ...

Okay. I'm a complete failure and it took me years to get to this and I'm really sorry, Susie dear. But I'm hear now! So let's get to it! :D ...

Antoinette d'Ouville Antoinette walked slowly through the rows of animal cages. She stopped at each cage, reached her hand in, and pet every animal - big and small - on ...

Sorry it's a tad long, got a bit carried away. xD Ara Ordoe Kyran had filled her in on her screaming in the night as soon as she awoke. It ...

Mmmm, more MGD :) It was deep and threatening and my tiny brain couldn’t comprehend at first where the noise came from. I don't like tiny here. It makes her ...

A little late, but better late than never, eh? :3 So let's get to it, then! I snapped my head to the left and sure enough, Riley was sitting on ...

THERE IS NOTHING TO SEE HERE Move along. This makes me highly suspicious... >.>

It's a little odd, but I think it gets the point across. The only problem would be if it doesn't fit in the context of the story. Just make sure ...

Some of the best advice I ever got on my writing was to avoid adverbs like the plague. A lot of description can be done just as (and more) effectively ...

Hey Micki! I'm so glad you're enjoying your time here at YWS! It really is a fantastic site. :) That's really neat that you're into manga and anime, I've found ...

Welcome to YWS Phoenix! You can do pretty much everything awesome here! You can post your works (everything from poetry to short stories to novels to scripts) and you can ...

Awesome! *makes loud congratulatory noises*

Oooo can I be a person (female, about the height of the average teenage girl, maybe shorter) with shoulder length brown hair? It'd also be neat if I could have ...

It's also interesting to take the basic legend and then change just one small part about it. Like, how zombies are created, what sort of abilities they have, what their ...

Ren sounds the most fitting for real life out of all of those. You may also want to consider naming patterns of the area she is from, because it could ...