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Hey Silent! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest!! She picked her way along the beach, trying to hold down her rebellious hair. This was revenge for getting ...

Hey thatboy! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here’s a quick review for entering! First off, I’d like to say this does an excellent job of setting ...

Hey Shinobi! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here’s a review for entering! Nitpicks: Verlinae had already made it down the stairs and was shouting for Sithe ...

Hey Micki! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here’s a quick review for entering! Nitpicks: “I know that. I'm not saying anything about fun and or games.” This sentence ...

Hey Knightly! This was so adorable! I love the way you wrote it switching between "he" and "she". The nameless characters allow it to be applied to any two people, ...

Totalitarian . It's just something about all the t's that makes it so much fun to say.

This is scandalous. Where are all you Firefox people going to?! Traitors! Firefox decided to eat my computer with a virus and then refused to ever work properly again. Firefox ...

Hey Gummyworm!! Welcome to YWS! What sort of short stories do you like to write? Fantasy? Romance? Horror? I myself tend to be a fan of writing fantasy. :) That's ...

Hey there Gemini! For a beginning, as you say this is, it's quite a good one. Content-wise, I'm intrigued and compelled to read more which is always your aim when ...

Hey jackle! This was an interesting start to a story! Nice job of introducing Jason as a character, as well as the environment it seems he'll be spending a significant ...

Hey tgirly! Wow, this was very good! So sweet, so innocent! Ahh I could just go on and on about what I love about it, but that wouldn't be very ...

Yeah, so I made one: And servant, I believe it is whatever URL you wish your tumblr to have :)

That poster is seriously cool. I think the movie stands a chance to do great justice to the books. In my opinion, the story is almost better suited for a ...

I'm seriously considering doing this for the viewpoint character I plan to use for my NaNoWriMo novel this year. ^.^

Hi Tanya! :3 Here to review! It doesn't matter how many times you post anything, I'm still coming by to review ;) Anyways, let's get on with it, shall we? ...