Lauren2010

Hey jasmine! Here for a review! :) First, my only nitpick: Shock was clear in his eyes somehow melding with this dazed, stoned sort of look, like he was actually ...

Submitted - thanks for the reviews guys! :D

Hi! *waves*

Name: Maura Rowe Age: 21 Gender Female (though often mistaken for male) For or Against: For whatever side suits her needs most at the moment Rank/Title/Occupation Outlaw - thief Appearance: ...

Can I claim an outlaw? (tunnel-dweller three??)

Woo! I'm in :)

Congrats! :D

Hi Silent! :D Nitpicks first: And an expensive-looking watch on his wrist. My fingers twitched. This line came really abruptly in an awkward sort of way. When I was reading, ...

BEN. Come back to us.

I just assumed SPEW still stood for Snoink's Perfectly Evil Minions. *shrugs* But wouldn't that be...SPEM?

Back again, Ray! Another great chapter! I'm loving all the twists and turns, and your pacing is just perfect for this story. I really liked how he didn't go all ...

Hey Ray! Back again for another review! Wow, killer ending! The progression of the plot is really good; it's paced well, and interesting too. I thought I might have known ...

Hey Ray! (Hah, that rhymed xD) I'd actually like to disagree with what everyone has been saying about journal format. Mostly because this doesn't completely strike me as already being ...

This is a short piece for a contest, with a 250 word limit so bear with the brevity xD It was also a picture-prompt of a busy market alley sort ...

Katngo: When you add another chapter, just add it to the novel forum as a regular literary work and there will be a prompt asking if it is part of ...