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Laura Sherwood | Sin's Penthouse : Balcony Ponyta was soaking up the attention, and Kristine was giving it away like potions at the free PokeClinic in Fuschia City. Laura ran ...

Dear Skinsy, This is my starting my review of this novel. I'll update this with comments probably after each chapter as I read, and once I finish I'll post up ...

Hi Searria! In my opinion, question marks can be used in whatever situation best suits them. I use them for inflection sometimes in my writing (like your example), even though ...

Laura Sherwood | Sin's Penthouse She finished off her pizza, lounging comfortably in her chair at the rich kid's table and watching the others talk. She wasn't quite sure what ...

EVERYONE SHOULD COME And not just because the lovely Stella Thomas with be co-hosting it. :) Because who doesn't want to write about holidays?!

Well, does she have to speak out loud? Every day, we all have our own internal dialogue going. We have thoughts about the things going on directly around us, and ...

Laura Sherwood|Celadon Gym Complex Laura rolled her eyes and handed the pen back toward Sam. "Really, you're probably going to need this more than me," she said. "That Scyther's agile, ...

Oh my goodness that is adorable. Thanks Lumidear! :)

Hey Hermes! You reviewed one of my pieces, so I'm here to return the favor and review one of yours! First, let's get through the nitpicks: Heather walked down the ...

Hey Jas! Here to review as requested! Sorry for the bit of a delay, but I'm here now. :) I really enjoyed this chapter. It was so sad, and I ...

Hiya Polinka! Back again to review! I adore Katrina already. She's exactly the kind of character these two need in their journey/lives. I also really like how you described love ...

Hey Polinka! Here again for another review! I really liked this chapter! I enjoy how Delem and Felix interact with each other. I also really really like the suspenseful ending ...

Hi Polinka! Here again for another review! It seems I've reviewed some of these out of order, and I apologize! I'll catch up and make sure they all get a ...

Hi Polinka! Here as requested! Sorry it's taken me so long to get to reviewing your new chapters, I've been busy, but I promise I'm on it now! I really ...

Yay! Congrats!