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  • Lounge, The Re: Relationships

    1. The latter? Although this is suggesting that gentle and compatible relationships can't be passionate, which I don't think is the case. 2. I don't have to be in a ...

    Jan 18, 2012
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: In The Eyes Of A Druid

    Hi emmylou! Lauren here for a review :) This piece is very beautifully written. I love the language you've used, and particularly the way you utilize the second person in ...

    Jan 15, 2012
  • Archive Re: Pokébook: Kanto

    Laura Sherwood "Just hold on a minute, Veronica ," she said as she turned back and knelt beside Kristine, dropping her own backpack beside the group. "I have a few ...

    Jan 14, 2012
  • Archive Re: Damsel in Distress

    Aryn Dawn Aryn sat astride her newly procured horse, with River perched in front of her. Others of the group watched them, not as sly in their observations as they ...

    Jan 14, 2012
  • Information Desk Archive Re: YWS: Apollo Updates Thread

    If you finish your work, I'll finish mine. Deal? Deal. Also, I'll, uhm, review a lot or something.

    Jan 13, 2012
  • Novel Workshop Re: Eventide: Part One

    Skinsy: Awh thanks dear! No rush, I'm already taking ages to get through Stop and Stare xD Lavvie: a surpise :O *wants to know*

    Jan 11, 2012
  • Lounge, The Re: Fiction Crew JANUARY Workshop

    For anyone stumbling across this, here is the gdoc the workshop will be held in: We'll be starting at 9pm GMT, but if you can pop in about 15 minutes ...

    Jan 7, 2012
  • Novel Workshop Re: Eventide: Part One

    Title: Eventide Genre: Fantasy Synopsis: Natura Halle has always done what she can for her family, especially in the face of her father's failing health. So when a man she ...

    Jan 6, 2012
  • Lounge, The Re: Fiction Crew JANUARY Workshop

    Yup! Still on!

    Jan 6, 2012
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Ghost of Theater two: Chapter one, "Four months later"

    Hey Berlynn! Here again as requested! Let's get right to it, shall we? "No, not really." He sat down and she continued looking through pictures. "Rebecca are you going to ...

    Jan 6, 2012
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Ghost of Theater 2: Prologue

    Hey Berlynn! Here as requested, sorry it took so long! Let's get right to it, then, shall we? "Do you have him?" A voice hissed from the receiver in my ...

    Jan 6, 2012
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Ray of Hope

    Hey Devan! Here again as requested! Sorry for it taking so long! Let's get right to it then ;) A young boy of around the age of ten was huddled ...

    Jan 5, 2012
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Help my Plot....Please?

    Hi Eloquent! Let me see what I can do to help you out here. Ash walks in to his apartment, there are three members of Omnicron 5 there, and they ...

    Jan 5, 2012
  • Lounge, The Re: Team Staff

    Okay, I'm totally going to do reviews today. Someone hold me to it! ---- LET IT BE KNOWN I did a review. It took me two hours, thanks to chat ...

    Jan 5, 2012
  • Research Re: How soon is too soon?

    Also, it depends on what the main action of the story is! If the story is about the act of them having sex, then you'll want to hold off and ...

    Jan 5, 2012


Journeys end in lovers' meeting.
— William Shakespeare