Lauren2010

xD sorry, I meant the 18th! *fixes*

It's that time again! Time for another Fiction Workshop! Are you struggling with Mary Sues and Gary Stus in your writing? Are your main characters just not real enough? Is ...

You could always combine POV strategies. For example, each chapter/section/whathaveyou would begin with a short diary entry from the POV of the MC themselves. This allows for things such as ...

Sae Carrow I Great Hall, Morning Sae slid gracefully onto the bench across from Owen and Matt at one of the tables in the Great Hall. Matt flicked through a ...

I thought houses *did* mingle for classes in canon? I seem to recall Draco and Harry in class together (though I may just be losing my mind xD) Either way, ...

Hey Saga! This thread is a bit debunk for a while (it being in the archives and all that) since YWS is being renovated and there are likely to be ...

Sae Carrow I Hogwarts Express The train came to a stop, a darkened forest looming outside the window. Owen and Matt rose from their places on either side of Sae, ...

Ahmad! Would you mind? It's a short story, but kind of a long one xD Thanks bud! -Lauren-

Sure think, Tink! The current line-up: -Emmzziee -Sureal -Jitterbug -tinkembell Note: I'll still take requests, but keep in mind it may take me a while to get to it! :)

Okay here's the line-up! -AhmadBlues -Emmzziee -Sureal -Jitterbug Also, Jitterbug, thanks for the tips! I was wondering about that, actually. And I'm sure eventually Nate will get around to putting ...

Sae Carrow I Hogwarts Express Sae wandered aimlessly through the train corridor, her trunk situated away with the other's beneath the train, with her broom still perched on her shoulder ...

Sae Carrow | Platform 9 ¾ Holding Felix close to her chest, Sae danced through the barrier onto Platform 9 ¾. As soon as she was through, she let out ...

Gotcha Dragongirl, and I'm working my way through Ahmad's novel. :) Feel free to drop more requests! I'm always eager to review :3

Confetti - The links from before the new lit works area aren't linking to the right things. You'd have to go back through and find the works in the new ...

Name: Saelynn "Sae" Carrow Gender: Female School Year: Fourth Year House: Ravenclaw Blood Status: Pure blood Wand Description: The wand is made of rosewood and has a core of dragon ...