Lauren2010

I think this is restating what the others have said but... Make some major changes to your characters. The sweet, shy girl and the arrogant, jock have been done so ...

*I forgot something...add Lives as a category in the profiles. This is where he/she lives (in the facility or elsewhere). Name: Hayley Lane, goes by Lane Age: 22 Level of ...

DT is up now. Thanks for waiting :)

Post all questions/comments/and concerns here, as well as character profiles. Let's keep the actual storybook as uncluttered as possible. :) Characters: Heroes: People who showed exceptional abilities

Wow, this was different. It kind of gave the whole funeral thing a bit of a different light. I enjoyed the script analogies throughout the story. And your description was ...

Hey there, and welcome to YWS! I really enjoyed this piece. From the beginning you set a tone that stuck with it to the end. Your characters were developed well ...

The DT isn't quite set up yet, I lack the appropriate pointage. It will be up soon though!

We are different from everyone else. From the day we were born we were able to do things others couldn’t. We learned faster, grew stronger, and excelled at what we ...

Mary Walking to the cafe by herself was relaxing. She had the option to wait and head over with Jonathan and Avaline, but going alone had seemed so much better. ...

Christina "Angel" Christina was quiet for a moment as she pondered this. She hadn't a clue what would happen to Roberta. She didn't even know what was going to happen ...

Dr. James Fields James hurried after the government man. He didn't trust him at all. He was skeptical, and skeptics were out to get James. Yes, they wanted to ruin ...

Mary In between classes mary managed to spread the word to most people about going to the cafe to hang out. She at least got the word to Jonathan, Avaline, ...

Evan Everything got better after the reinforcements arrived. Evan helped the others in bringing a few men down. He didn't even use his powers a whole lot, just good old ...

Hey! I'm Lauren and I'll be reviewing for you today. Wow this was really good! It was very much unlike anything I have read lately. I'd be interested in what ...

Oh, I thought he was still around Evan. =/ sorry