Lauren2010

Mary The others went to dance, but Mary stayed at the table. It's not that she didn't want to go dance with the others. It's just, if no one asks ...

Mary Everyone Mary had invited had shown up, and she was overjoyed. Travis had even brought us all out milkshakes. He didn't look too bad in his uniform, as it ...

No the school isn't uniformed, but students should dress is something they can use their powers and train in. Hayley Lane "Well if it isn't Miss Hayley Lane," a familiar ...

Okay, I'm going to go ahead and start us. People are still allowed to join (and of course it's encouraged!) just post your profile in the DT and jump on ...

of course you're in shadow :) I think we can start today, but if anyone is still interested in joining they can! Also, I think Terri may get lonely so ...

Dr. James Fields James sighed as Cole pushed past with Stone at his side. This man would certainly ruin the entire program. James slightly lost track of where he was ...

Hallucinations are perfectly acceptable (at least in my opinion) in fiction writing. They walk that fine line between a dream sequence and reality without crossing over into the taunting dream ...

Plot is a very tricky little thing. It can come and go, change, and re-invent itself. Generally, you can get by with just writing until a cute little plot bunny ...

My only advice is to scrap calling her a "vampire" because from what you say it doesn't sound very vampirish. And people are getting tired of the "not your average ...

I personally think the beginning fine. Though I didn't understand the actuality of the statement until reading further, which I think helps give the fact of being bred an impact. ...

Ada "Aylen!" I shouted, looking to see her lying on the cement floor. "Hey guys," she said. Before I could welcome her back into the group, Oliver started pulling people ...

This was pretty good, an interesting perspective. Your characters were pretty good though, and the setting was decent (though the description could have been better). I don't really see much ...

This was very good for an excerpt! I felt connected with the scene and the characters even though this is (probably) not where the characters are first introduced. It interested ...

Yay! So many people are joining! Okay, so the male to female ratio currently stands at 3:2 and a lot of people claimed spots for girls. Let's just try to ...

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