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Anianna "Do we take him to Senator Lyconia?" Anianna whispered to Isis, so softly no human could possibly have even heard it. Isis turned to Archimedes and seemed to ask ...

Christina "Oh, oh, I have a question!" Christina said, raising her hand in the air. Ali laughed and pointed to her. "Yes, Christina?" "You were talking about ages earlier, and ...

If you take a stroll through the literary forums (especially the fiction, especially the fantasy) it’s easy to spot the multitude of prologues. This isn’t entirely a bad thing; it’s ...

Okay so here's what I've got so far (which isn't much) The Black Jolly is covered, the guy who sent the package to Siolfor included the necessary items from there. ...

Anianna The way to the surface was an interesting path. It started in the warmth of the caverns and slowly became cooler and cooler as the outside world came closer. ...

Hah, pretty much all I got was the quest. Maybe we should make a DT and all discuss it to some length? We should try to rally the other characters ...

Seth Ever asked if anyone else remembered a time before they were in cells. Seth immedeatly felt the old feeling of anger and helplessness creep back in his head. He ...

This was really clever! Only a few things do I have to say... 1) The beginning is a little cliche high school experience movie with the "Queen Bee" and a ...

Hello! Here as requested! I've read everything up to this point (and this as well of course) and I really like the general plot and such. It's a different kind ...

Charlotte - HM Sailor She laughed at Darsidian's quick remark. It was easy to expect given his profession and undeniable love of gold. "Of course it will pay well, my ...

Texan: surely. :) Rilyn Anianna has a betrothed now :D And a question...which name would they be commonly reffered to by? For example: Rilyn or Anianna?

Found I don't have time for this storybook, sorry, I'm dropping :/

So many reveiws! Hah, well here I am as requested anyways. My first big nit-pick is that often you missed having spaces after your periods and commas. It just kind ...

Okay, this was good as well! I see that it is different from the prologue (as it is set many years in the future). Have to admit it kind of ...

This was interesting and I enjoyed it. Good job! :) Character development: I felt you did a really good job with this, especially with giving the reader an emotional feel ...