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I think we should give everyone a little bit to see who is all game.

Madison/Hush "So where are we going?" Madison asked. Just as she spoke, her stomach growled loudly. Sully laughed. "I guess it looks like we're going out for dinner." The doctor ...

I think we should PM people and at least try to get them in. If not, I'm up for posting for others I suppose. Though, Ada just changed her appearance ...

name- Elijah "Jay" age- 19 gender- male appearance- interesting blue hair (think of a blue jay). Tall and well muscled, but thin. Dresses rather plainly and doesn't fuss much over ...

Aisling "Aisling!" Jay's voice broke through the silence outside the cabin. "Aisling, where are you?" There was fear in his voice. That was something Jay would never let happen. He ...

Casey "Guys, I think I've found something!" Lydia called. Casey ran to where her voice had come from, followed by the others. They found Lydia staring up at a decently ...

I'm tied up until someone else posts...I guess I could think of something though.

Ada and DJ are up for another run!

Madison/Hush After a little hesitation, Madison climbed into the truck. It was a little uncomfortable, but the three of them fit right in. Luckily Madison hadn't been one for nourishment ...

This was an interesting piece but as a prologue...not so much. I don't feel like it accomplishes much in the way of a prologue. It forshadows a bit, but in ...

Hey there Durriedog! I'm Lauren and I'll be your reviewer today. I really liked this. It is a very interesting idea, and I would like to see where it goes. ...

Welcome to YWS RoxanneDeMonica! I'm Lauren, and I'll review for you today. :) I really enjoyed this poem. As Conrad mentioned, you managed to convey an emotion subtly and that ...

I very much enjoyed this poem! I'm personally one for colorful vocabulary and you used it perfectly here. The story the poem tells is great as well. Its simplicity balances ...

Madison/Hush "You could always join us," Sully said gently. Madison considered this. Sully acted nice enough. He put her at ease. The doctor even seemed kind; she was a ragdoll ...

Casey Dan pulled his arm back as though he was going to punch Oliver in the face. He was acting crazy! This was not the Dan that Casey knew. "Flea, ...