Lauren2010

O.O Murderer substitute teacher! Wasn't expecting that at all. On to the reviewing... It seems as if this chapter was a tad rushed. Try expanding on things. You wanted to ...

Hello again! Another great chapter. I only found one grammar mistake. He’d been back to the orphanage for almost a year now and now the Price’s were trying to have ...

Another lovely chapter! I feel so bad for Noah and all his bad luck. I'm a bit confused... How old is Tya? I was under the impression that she was ...

O.O Wow. This chapter has some disturbing stuff in it, but it is all real. Very good job of writing it, I was enthralled. Concerning all the info on the ...

A great first chapter! I'm sticking with my feeling that I liked the prologue. It works in this case. And I applaud you for that! It is hard to write ...

Hey! Wow, this was great. I don't usually like prologues, but this was actually pretty good (though I haven't read any more of this story yet). The story is very ...

*jumps up and down* It's back! :) I always liked reading this, and was sad when it stopped coming around. Anyways, on to the review... I enjoyed this chapter. I ...

Thanks to everyone who reviewed! This is currently being rewritten.

Silly gianstlenate09. You won't know anyone here at YWS. But we will love having you here anyways! Welcome! P.S. if anyone wonders, I do know him.

Hello Lavender. That's really exciting about your novel being published! What type of writing do you usually do? (fantasy, sci-fi, etc) What's your favorite color? Welcome to YWS! -Lauren

Nate Nate Nate! Tell us about yourself. What do you like to write? What is your favorite color? What is your favorite flightless bird?!? All important facts.

RSVP! *is pumped*

James He glared at the guy. "You're lucky this time," he said. "Now watch it or next time you won't be so lucky." James stormed out of the store, leaving ...

Nice chapter! You definitely cleared a lot of things up. There are just a few items I would like to address. Once we’d gotten out of the bedroom, we’d made ...

James "Are you okay...?" James started. "Sam," the girl answered. "James. Are you alright? That guy's an idiot," James said. "If you want, I can go take care of him." ...