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Hey Tanya! I actually think I may have read the previous version? It sounded familiar. Anyways. I really liked this chapter. Riley has a very pronounced personality for an animal. ...

*saves spot for deep reader*

Yay! Riley "Red" All the blood in Riley's body rushed to her head as she viewed the world upside down. The apartment-style dorm was empty and silent, except for Riley's ...

I don't care what room Asta, Red, Jay, and Ever are in. One of you guys can pick :)

Name: Jacquilynn "Jackie" Smith Age: 17 Gender: female Physical Appearance: -Height: 5'6" -Weight: Uh, I don't know. She's pretty thin, lets just say that. -Hair: Long, straight, and blonde -Eyes: ...

Go ahead and introduce me to Ben as well, I'd like to give him a nice punch to the face. Hah. I do really like though that they aren't treating ...

Should we do a headcount? Like, whose in each room? So we know who still needs a roommate? Just a thought.

Sounds good to me A.J :D Anyone else want to room with Jay (Anellise) and Red (Riley)?

Hey Black Thought! Wow, you've really got something on your hands here. I liked this story a lot, though Conrad and I are two of a small group of YWSers ...

I vote for starting en route to Ali's place. Like, the first posts are in the van speeding away, with everyone kind of worried/excited/freaking out/etc.

How many people to a room? And my girl is up for rooming with whomever. We should be the Fighting Octupi xD Or, you know, something generic like the Tigers, ...

Hey TheNewHero. First off, let me point out that I'm not such a huge fan of prolgoues in general. So don't be put off by anything I might not say...nicely. ...

Aw this was cute. Overall an adorable story. I love the concept and I think that someday when you have time you should try expanding this into a longer story. ...

I really love your concept here. You certainly have an interesting and unique idea to this. In addition to what others have pointed out, I only have a few things... ...

woah, we're starting???