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Jackie "Trust me Jack, you'll love it," Jared insisted. Jackie made a gagging noise and shook her head. "Jared you know I'm a vegetarian." "Yeah and I still don't get ...

Woah, skipping ahead. Let me try to fill the gap... Noah "Nah, too fancy," Devi said. Noah looked around the shop a few more times, settling on what he thought ...

Kaywiia, the troupe is performing in Venice and...they aren't performing yet.

Another nice chapter. Only one or two things this time... I'm concerned with the amount of time she spent training. Only 2 weeks? For someone who was apparently out of ...

Hey there, back again for another review. ;) Alright. This was a pretty good chapter, but I think it could be even better . A few things... 1) And so ...

bubblegum, aren't they rooming with Red and Jay? If so, I think Jay is in the room so why not pop on in?

Noah "Get him a red and gold one!" Lovie called back over her shoulder. "It'd be mmmm-fine!" Noah thought over this. He supposed he didn't mind those colors in a ...

Jane It was rather surprising, really, that Jane had been assigned a mission after performing so terribly. She couldn't possibly understand it. Maybe they just wanted her dead as quickly ...

Noah The girls ran inside gladly, immedeatly sifting through racks of dresses and displays of masks. Noah sauntered through racks of gentleman's clothes, unsure of what he should actually be ...

I looved the fiddling, and the whales, and the poet was pretty epic too. I thought it was pretty neat overall. :)

Noah Regretfully abandoning the camp, where his tiger friends had to stay, Noah ventured into town. He kept a short distance from Devi, Caroline, and Lovie, but was close enough ...

Jackie Why hadn't Anna just left it alone? Why couldn't she have just gone to the lake without any of the questions? Now Jackie had run off. Into the woods. ...

Jane Jane hadn't been doing very well in the training so far. The scientists hadn't given her the serum of any sort of winged animal. Instead, she was stuck beig ...

Riley "Red" Duncan and Jay got me to the clinic just fine, though the stupid nurse wouldn't let me leave until morning. "You have a broken wrist, who knows what ...

Jackie Everyone else ran towards the lake, but Jackie was frozen to the spot. A lake? Shouldn't she have known they'd be near water? And that with a bunch of ...