Lauren2010

O.o Dead parents! Nice twist there! There wasn't much to say about this chapter. I may have noticed one grammatical error...but I can't find it now so maybe someone else ...

Hey Pink. I have three chapters of my Fantasy novel, Eventide up on YWS (I think I posted the first chapter a good while ago, though) and never got the ...

Hey WD, I have three chapters of a Fantasy novel ( Eventide ) I've been working on up on YWS (and they have been up for a while I think...) ...

Riley "Red" "You don't look so bad. What do you say about a little break out?" I grinned. "Well, there is a party tonight that I'd like not to miss. ...

Jackie Jared pulled Jackie to her and she buried her head in his chest while the wolves slammed themselves against the van. She was crying again, which she hated. She ...

Jackie "You will teach me how to swim," Jackie insisted. Under any other circumstances she wouldn't have believed she would say those words. For years the water had terrified her, ...

Riley "Red" I sulked in my stupid hospital bed for hours, alone. The nurse had even left to sit in her office and play solitare on her computer. My cast ...

"Ooh," Greg gave an excited shiver as he came up behind me "a cat fight. That's hot. I'm soup for that." You misses a space between so and up. So ...

Sorry I'm a bit late after your PM but I've been busy. And yeah, I changed my pic sorry you were lost! xD Wow, I really liked this chapter! Really ...

I read it all! And really enjoyed it. A secret between you and me, I've heard so much about this around the site (on your blog particularly) and have been ...

Jane The thought of getting another dose of DNA wasn't exactly pleasant. The first round was killer painful, and with possible death the second time around? Jane was disappointed with ...

I agree. Who wants him? Jackie "Anna?" Jackie shouted, looking around frantically. No, no, no. She couldn't have. Something couldn't have happened to her. She was just here. Just here. ...

Noah Something changed in Noah's head when he went to 'paradise' with Cora. He felt it; something different inside him. He felt like...maybe...he remembered something. "That when we recover, we ...

Come on guys, don't let this die :(

Noah He didn't know what had come over him, but suddenly he was sprinting after the girl, Carmen. Something he couldn't understand propelled him forward. He thought maybe it was ...