Lauren2010

Welcome kensiecb! YWS surely is a lovely place to be. And a great place to get constructive criticism! I'm been on here for around a year and have recieved endless ...

Eh, I decided to go with just one Name: Amy Theis Gender: female Age: 17 Personality: Amy doesn't talk to many people. She was just recently picked up and taken ...

Hey Black Thought! This was great. I love the voice you give your characters, and how the words you use and how you spell them reflects that. It's not confusing ...

Wow this is really good! I enjoyed every bit of it, and want to read more. I only had one thing to point out. To be with people- part of ...

Hello RainStormZ, I'm Lauren and I'll be reviewing for you today. This is very interesting! I like the concept of the Byari, and the two moons, and everything else! You ...

I'm digging the layout. :D

Another good chapter! The fight scene seemed to go on for a long time, like TreeHugger said. It felt like overkill. The only part I think that should have been ...

It was possible that this was also the care, but I had my doubts. case, not care I snorted. Because you have too many questions to ask and that one ...

Great chapter! I really love the budding romantic relationship between Shanna and Riley. You keep it going and interesting without letting it take over. Just be careful it doesn't end ...

Hey! Really sorry for the delay, I've been super busy lately and somehow this chapter slipped by me. I'm still following the story, don't worry! :) I'll only make a ...

Sorry for the delay! I enjoyed this chapter, and the way the story is heading now. Conflict is always good :) My comments: I agree with Rosey, the sixteen year ...

Can I make two characters? I'll join regardless, and I'll post whatever profiles I'm allowed later.

Sorry I've been gone for a while. It's been crazy week for my school's musical. Ana Charlene had gladly agreed to join Ana at the farm until Peter would return ...

This is awesome. I'm pumped to get some of my articles from my school paper out to a more...erm...appreciative audience. :P

Jessi Double oh eight had killed Alfie. Though she hadn't ever had an especially strong affection for the man, she still felt shocked that he had been killed so...drastically. Well, ...