Lauren2010

Alright, we'll probably start later today or tomorrow, let a few more people join. I might throw up a second profile, but who knows. Thanks to everyone who has joined ...

Amy - Cobras The bus ride was ridiculously boring. No one spoke, not even the fidgety kid who sat beside Amy. He had eaten something with onions for lunch, Amy ...

So many male characters! Name: Bailey Hart Age(15-18): 16 (first year) Gender: female Appearance: But not as creepy wide-eyed as her. xD Personality: Baily is exciting and hyperactive. She loves ...

Hello Zibbie! This was pretty interesting. The intruige surrounding the dream and the mystery of Sera changing overnight would make me want to read more of this, so that's good. ...

Welcome to YWS Mark! That's great that you've done so well with your poetry! We have a lot of poets here on YWS, and some of them are quite good! ...

Hey there Ace! Welcome to YWS! India? That's fascinating. I've always wanted to see India. Sports are fun, and I share the same boredom in math class. Hah! Question time! ...

Hey there grimy! I'm Lauren and I'll be reviewing for you today. This was pretty interesting, though quite short so there isn't much for me to go off of review-wise. ...

First review ^_^ Anyways. I only have one nitpick so lets get that out of the way first, shall we? I wonder what I would have chosen as I shape, ...

Hey there DustyDust. You definitely have an interesting premise on your hands! The whole being dug out of the grave, and being unnoticed by the human eye. Quite interesting. One ...

Do it crocksy, do it! All the cool kids are joining. :P Thanks to everyone who has joined so far!

Hey snoopysoap! Lauren here, I just reviewed the prologue so here it goes! (I'm going to kind of review this as I read, so my overall impression will be at ...

O.o So many commas... The prologue, quite intruiguing, but the commas, oh dear. One big misconception about commas is that they must be used, which is entirely untrue. Commmas should ...

You know you're a writer when you have to write things out in order to make sense of them. You know you're a writer when you start talking about someone ...

Hello, I am a vampire, and I sparkle. xD

Constructive criticism = yay! You're very welcome to be here, Standard. Like Stella mentioned, those one liners of encouragement tend to come from newer members who aren't as critique savvy ...