Lauren2010

Nice chapter! I like Scott, but something makes me feel a little wary about him too. It's rather exciting. I can't wait to see what comes of his role. :) ...

Hey maegardens! This was pretty interesting, but I feel like I'm being held at a distance from the story. Instead of telling what happens through narration, try showing us what ...

*woah, sorry I haven't posted in this for a while. Sort of thought it died and forgot about it* Bianca "Marie" Cheshire Whilst staring out her window, Bianca noticed something ...

Gwendolen The woman, Lorraine, had been quite kind and allowed Gwendolen to keep her horse in the stables for a low price. Gwendolen was making sure her mare was situated ...

I'm quite average-ish All you young'uns, we'll never get tired of you! :D

Sock, Gwen isn't under her man-disguise currently. It sounded like you portrayed her as such. She's dressed as a woman now, and her hair is much longer than before so ...

Gwendolen A plump little man met Gwendolen at his home near the outskirts of Haven. He dabbed at his forehead continuously with a brown-strained cloth and gasped for air after ...

Welcome to YWS OisinBebe! It's great to have you! One good novel. That sounds like a great ambition, and one that YWS will certainly help you achieve! What genre do ...

Gwendolen Droplets of sun fell through the canopy of leaves, and danced over Gwendolen’s thin body. She reveled in the peacefulness of the silent grove, imagining just lying there forever. ...

Hey Maki-Chan! This is really good! Much better than I could ever do. Do you use some sort of computer program to make this? I'm just curious. :) Now I'm ...

My only two associates seem to have forgotten about this story... I'll probably PM them later.

Yay more Shifters! :D I, again, enjoyed this chapter. It was small, but held a lot of much needed affection and happiness. Every story needs a little break from the ...

Marie Luckily, the Pokemon Centre wasn't far. Callie, Ella, and Marie traveled the distance together, talking and getting to know each other on the way. In the centre, a smiling ...

Hey Natibabes97! This was amusing. Though, I feel like it isn't formatted right for lyrics. It should be seperated into verses, choruses, etc. This doesn't look like a parody to ...

This was really amusing! I'm no lyric expert, but there were two things that stood out to me in this. 1. The formatting. Please take the time to format this ...