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A big thanks to all reviewers, this is currently being rewritten.

Hey Kyllorac! I really enjoyed these! They were far more true to the typical vampire than the crazy sparkling Twilight vamps. I really really liked the second one, with the ...

Of course, jem!

Hey! Nice chapter, lots of action, big plot change at the end, it's all great. I especially enjoyed CJ's escapades, and it's backfiring on her. She's such an amusing character. ...

Definitely! We probably won't start for about a week and a half (I'm going on vacation, leaving Friday). So a spot will definitely be open for you. Yeah, everyone else, ...

Thanks for the interest, everyone!

Here's my profile: Name: Ara Young Age: 24 Gender: female Illness: Dementia Reason for institutionalization: Ara was the artistic director of a major advertising company, and designs advertisements fo

Under the regime of the oligarchy of the New United Nations of the World, all the best and the brightest people of the super-nation have been placed in correctional institutions ...

New Independence Day – April 23rd 2076 After fifty years of persecution under the cruel dictatorship of President Blair, a revolution has succeeded. The people of the New United Nations ...

This was really interesting, almost poetic. I enjoyed it. There are probably a few sentences that could be re-worded to flow better, but that's minimal and to keep up the ...

I totally called that twist ;) That's good... and bad. A twist is a twist, and still thrilling no matter what, but a really really unexpected twist is even better. ...

I'm pretty sure that with any usage of someone elses characters or specific ideas, you would definitely need to contact them or whoever holds the copyright in order to gain ...

Hey Jackpot! This was an interesting prologue, though I'm not usually one for prologues. Prologues are pretty hard to write well, and I'm going to give you some pointers to ...

Hey Blanch! This was really interesting! I like the concept, and the way you wrote it really fits the story. Now onto my nitpicking: When I saw my death she ...

Cari Thunder rumbled across the darkening sky. Cari stopped her trek for a few minutes to inspect what she had brought out of the cornicopia bloodbath for the first time. ...