Lauren2010

Hey there! Here to critique again! This was an interesting chapter, but still watch the pacing. Slowing things down a bit and throwing in description is perfectly fine and will ...

Hey! Here again! You should definitely check out all the stuff in my last review, so I'm not going to restate any of that. I'll focus on some other things ...

Hey! Here to review again! Perhaps fate brought them together, both Lan and Huo studied in the same school naming Mo Hum School. It looked like some original school but ...

Hello fruityminyi! Well, you have an interesting concept here! I enjoyed reading this very much, and would be interested in seeing where you take this idea. The writing itself is ...

I think we'll be fine. jemjive is going to post a profile soon. Ara Young Play chess? Ara knew perfectly well how to play chess, but chess playing wasn't something ...

Yeah, please don't let this die so early :(

The name of my character is Rigel, only one letter away! O.O

It was super fun. And now for some reason the first picture is so small... I'm not even going to try and fix that. Photobucket clearly hates me.

I went indoor skydiving with my friends on our vacation last week. It's generally the same feeling as actual skydiving, but you have more of a sense of motion in ...

I tried to add two articles from the Writing Tutorials section of the Knowledge Base to a newly created anthology, but it claimed I had already added both of those ...

Hey Rygel! I just welcomed you, and imagine my surprise when you had posted something in the lovely Fantasy forum. Fantasy is sort of my thing. ;) Anyways. On to ...

Welcome to YWS Jessedrop! Film is so cool, even if you are only filming (un)woolly cows. That's unfortunate that one tried to eat your hair. I used to go with ...

Welcome to YWS! Wow, you've done a lot! Keep it up! Who cares if you're crazy, we're all a little crazy around here. ^.^ I'm sure you will find many ...

Welcome to YWS Pocahontas! It's great to have you! Try checking out the chat room, if you haven't already. It's accesible from the front page. It's a great way to ...

Welcome to YWS Rygel! Wow, your name is so close to the name of one of my characters. Scary, huh? :P What kind of stuff do you like to write? ...