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  • Lounge, The Re: Inception

    I loved Inception. And not just because I have a weird celeb-crush on Leonardo DiCaprio :P The story was great, as was the visuals of it. Best movie I've seen ...

    Aug 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: deleted

    Hey Blackbird! Here as requested! :) This was very good! I really like the emotion in the piece, it's hard to really convey emotion in writing and this was great. ...

    Aug 9, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: Should I edit or just rewrite the whole thing?

    I went through this same thing with my novel. I had lost interest in it, but one day picked it up again and really looked at it. I needed to ...

    Aug 8, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: hi

    Welcome to YWS! Any friend of Eli's is a friend of ours. :3 You're probably already getting the hang of things, since you have a personal guide around here and ...

    Aug 7, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Accents

    The Midland Dialects Midland dialects retain R in all positions, and long I is not flattened (monophthongized) as uniformly as in the South, but the Midland is otherwise not very ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Im new and if people could review that would rock

    Welcome to YWS! It's awesome to have you here! Why don't you tell us a little about yourself? What do you like to write? Poetry? Ficiton? What genre? What's your ...

    Aug 5, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Your favourite fairytale?

    I like Snow White and Rose Red (I'm pretty much adoring my book of Grimm's Fairy Tales I got recently) and I've always liked Little Red Riding Hood.

    Aug 4, 2010
  • Mod Squad Jungle Gym Re: Answers to Questions Everyone Has

    Updated: 8/3/10 Added in a bit about YWS Pages and Anthologies

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi, Everyone!

    Welcome to YWS itisme! YWS is a fantastic place, but it can be a tad confusing for a new member. If you're confused, or just want to learn a bit ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Abnormal is my Middle Name!

    Welcome to YWS, Alexis! This is really the best writing forum you could be a part of. Of course, I'm a little biased, but I love this place to death. ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi :)

    Welcome to YWS! Haha, I did this same thing when I joined YWS. I didn't make a welcome mat post until like a month after I joined. :P I'm glad ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Possessing Maya (rewritten!) OLD

    Tanya! This is so much improved from the first version! Fantastic job. :) Here are my few nitpicks: “Do it,” Maya thought almost eagerly, eyeing the blade. If he tried ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Research Re: What makes someone annoying?

    To really accentuate this particular characters annoying-ness, makes sure the other characters would find his personality annoying. If they're annoyed, then the feeling is much more likely to transfer

    Aug 2, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Featured Member for August: Jetpack!

    Yay Jetpack!

    Aug 2, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Can someone tell me what the heck Monochrome is?

    Wikipedia describes monochrome as: Monochrome[1] describes paintings, drawings, design, or photographs in one color or shades of one color.[2] A monochromatic object or image has colors in shades of l

    Aug 2, 2010


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