Lauren2010

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We rock. End of story.

Hey there Kladi! I've read over the first part of this chapter already, so this will be a review over the whole chapter. :) I really enjoyed reading this! It ...

Hey Kafka! Chapter three must have slipped under my radar, well here I am to review again! He has eyes the colors of cubes. Was it said what color the ...

Hey Kafka, back for another review! What I saw inside the cubes...I could not see what was inside. (I condensed this whole paragraph down, just so you know what I'm ...

Hey there Kafka! This was seriously awesome, in a mind boggling sort of way. The tone fit perfectly, and the use of complex vocab was impressive (are you really thirteen? ...

Yes! You've posted! Let's get through a few nitpicks first ;) Step away from the creepy dude, my mind urged me. It would be much more effective, I think, to ...

Here's a really good "rant" on travel. It's focused on travel in fantasy, and I don't know if what you're writing is fantasy, but it could still apply! Here it ...

It depends on what audience you're writing for. If you're writing for kids in the middle school, early high school range then yeah try and censor as much as you ...

Try creating your own label for these people. You said they are another race, so name the race. It doesn't have to relate to the words "gifted", "talented", or "special" ...

That's awesome Jenth! Thanks so much! :D

Topic descriptions! :D Favorite re-addition to the site ever. *parties*

Stormy Graves There was actually a girl at my high school who was named that.

Alright, finally around again for a review. ;) This chapter was a little stiff at first, but it easily warmed back up into the flow of your typical writing, which ...

Lauren - I looked up your novel after your first post. I guessed it was Eventide (I think it was the only novel there) and instantly came up with the ...