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Re: Round the Bend
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May 22, 2008 -
Re: To Write With The Left
Hello. Will get straight on to the analysis thingy. The sound of horse hooves pounding on moist soil roared through the quiet town, bouncing off the rural manors and abundant ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: How to Start Over
Hello there! Well, my first thoughts are that this has potential. You have a good plot going - but I do have some hold-ups (sorry). First off, you've told us ...
May 17, 2008 -
Re: Bestfriends and Nothing More?
Good start, but to be honest, it didn't really draw me in. But of course, there is always room for improvement - what would the world be without trial and ...
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Southern Sky - Part I
Hi, alicat159! So, I like what I'm reading, which is always good. It seems that this is reasonably strong foundations for a good story. There's definitely a good character in ...
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Fairborough - Part 1
Thank you, Rubric. I wondered why nobody reviewed :) You have really helped. I guess I am a little over-zealous with the ol' commas.
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Fairborough - Part 1
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May 13, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Hello. I'm Lauren. Thought I'd join this site since I don't really know anyone else seriously interested in writing. I'm hoping this place helps in the longrun :) I like ...
Apr 27, 2008