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Lauren

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Road to Atonement

    Hi :D You reviewed my story, so I'm happily returning the favour. I'll comment as I read through and then conclude afterwards. David Furey woke to the clang of an ...

    May 10, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Avowal Before the Rope

    Thanks, girlanachronism. I see what you're saying, and yes, she killed the baby. I really wanted to write more about the act itself but, knowing myself, I feared edging off ...

    May 10, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Avowal Before the Rope

    Hi, Rosey. Thanks for the helpful critique, and of course spending some time on my work. Well, you see I meant for it to be set around the fifties/early sixties ...

    May 10, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Avowal Before the Rope

    This user has been banned and her works removed from YWS.

    May 8, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Garden Party

    Hi :) This look v. interesting and so deserves, I think, one of my amateurish reviews. Wahey! Anyway, I'll comment as I read through, and then conclude at the end, ...

    May 8, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Flying

    Hi :) What I'll do is I'll comment as I read through and then write a little summary at the end, okay? I felt a hot twinge of excitement as ...

    May 6, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Demeter and Becki need you!

    Have fun, guys! I so wish I could go on these YWS meet-ups but I'm not allowed to go anywhere. I'm like a battery hen.

    May 5, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    Chupatoasta, such lovely hair and eyes! I love the first pic, all the colours!

    May 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Revenge

    Okay, I stand corrected! :*) I'll admit now that I've never seen a lake in my entire life.

    Apr 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Falling Slowly [1]

    Hi, Colleen. I distinctly remember your helpful crits and so have come to repay the favour! I'll comment as I read and then conclude below, okay? Shay looked down at ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Revenge

    Hello! I don't think I've seen you around before, but I'm Lauren. I'll try to give as helpful an input as I can. x] I critique as I read and ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Are you afraid of the mods?

    *Scoffs* They do not scare me .

    Apr 27, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    Lookin' good, Peanut! x] My friend Ruby and I were just messing about on Saturday and gave each other eighties hairstyles. Being nineties-kids, we could only judge from bad movies ...

    Apr 27, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    Pretty Rosey! 8)

    Apr 23, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Photies!

    Squeee! Thornfield Hall... kind of. Beautiful pics, becki. but then who'd expect anything else?

    Apr 22, 2009


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