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Re: The Road to Atonement
Hi :D You reviewed my story, so I'm happily returning the favour. I'll comment as I read through and then conclude afterwards. David Furey woke to the clang of an ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: Avowal Before the Rope
Thanks, girlanachronism. I see what you're saying, and yes, she killed the baby. I really wanted to write more about the act itself but, knowing myself, I feared edging off ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: Avowal Before the Rope
Hi, Rosey. Thanks for the helpful critique, and of course spending some time on my work. Well, you see I meant for it to be set around the fifties/early sixties ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: Avowal Before the Rope
This user has been banned and her works removed from YWS.
May 8, 2009 -
Re: The Garden Party
Hi :) This look v. interesting and so deserves, I think, one of my amateurish reviews. Wahey! Anyway, I'll comment as I read through, and then conclude at the end, ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Flying
Hi :) What I'll do is I'll comment as I read through and then write a little summary at the end, okay? I felt a hot twinge of excitement as ...
May 6, 2009 -
Re: Demeter and Becki need you!
Have fun, guys! I so wish I could go on these YWS meet-ups but I'm not allowed to go anywhere. I'm like a battery hen.
May 5, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Chupatoasta, such lovely hair and eyes! I love the first pic, all the colours!
May 2, 2009 -
Re: The Revenge
Okay, I stand corrected! :*) I'll admit now that I've never seen a lake in my entire life.
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Falling Slowly [1]
Hi, Colleen. I distinctly remember your helpful crits and so have come to repay the favour! I'll comment as I read and then conclude below, okay? Shay looked down at ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: The Revenge
Hello! I don't think I've seen you around before, but I'm Lauren. I'll try to give as helpful an input as I can. x] I critique as I read and ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Are you afraid of the mods?
*Scoffs* They do not scare me .
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Lookin' good, Peanut! x] My friend Ruby and I were just messing about on Saturday and gave each other eighties hairstyles. Being nineties-kids, we could only judge from bad movies ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Pretty Rosey! 8)
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: Photies!
Squeee! Thornfield Hall... kind of. Beautiful pics, becki. but then who'd expect anything else?
Apr 22, 2009
