LauRux

Welcome! It's always nice seeing new faces :). That's awesome that you are a graphic designer, very interesting career. I went to Europe this summer but I didn't get to ...

Hey Caitlyn! I really enjoyed this story so far. The orphanage idea is a pretty over-used idea, but I didn't notice so much because the characters were cool and interesting. ...

I have to say I agree with Flower-Child. Though I read your post about this being about drugs, I am still confused by it. You didn't really convey much emotion ...

As Wicked Wonder pointed out, there are quite a few grammatical and spelling mistakes that can be easily fixed. If you aren't very good with that sort of thing, try ...

It felt a little weird to me, comparing a common exchange between friends to something as momentous as the forbidden fruit. You hardly get kicked out of the Garden of ...

Wait, I'm a bit confused, so the man on trial killed his own wife, which the lawyer loved? Then in a later post you say it was the lawyers wife. ...

Oh wow. This piece is absolutely heart wrenching. It truly touched me and I am so glad I took the time to read it. “A wild girl, sitting on a ...

Hey, congrats on being featured :). This story has a lot of potential! To start off, I agree with what Griffin said, I got a bit bored by the reminiscing ...

Wow, I have to say I am blown away. The darkness and evil is painted so well with your writing style! My favorite line was this one: He could hear ...

Wow, gosh, thanks so much. I have been doing more practice writing, short stories and such, and I have found that it helps. The index card idea is a new ...

I know what you mean Snoink, romances can be absolutely ridiculous, but so hot that they can't be resisted. I like to read young adult romance with a paranormal twist. ...

Oops, sorry for posting it in the wrong place! Thanks for straightening that out for me. I don't really know how to describe what I'm after, but the link you ...

I am in the process of writing a novel and I am looking for a site that has plot charts I could use. I am thinking of something that has ...

Great writing! I like that the dialogue flows and feels very natural. It would be nice if you added the main character's name and gender, though. I got a bit ...

Thanks for all the replies! I never expected to be welcomed so thoroughly, so thanks for that. To answer some of the questions... My first impression of the site was ...