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I don't know if this is the right section to put this, please correct me if I'm wrong :). So I'm in the process of researching for a novel that ...

Thanks so much! Sometimes my carefulness gets the best of me ;)

Hi wickedwonder! I really did like this. The story was simple and relate-able. I never get tired of teen angst. My favorite line was this one: Fast forward to Halloween ...

Hey ShaddowSoldier! So I'm going to start off by saying I like the concept of this story. People say dragons have been over done in fantasy, but I absolutely love ...

I don't know if this is the right forum, but here I go. So I've had this idea for a novel start to percolate in my mind and I need ...

Gah! D: Stupid man! Such a pig. I wish Nigha could come back to life. What's going to happen to her mom and her dad? This is so sad :(. ...

Holy Cow! My heart was racing! Megsug was right, you do have talent. She pretty much covered everything in her review. I just wanted to say that I loved it. ...

Oh my goodness, I love this! Totally bizarre but fun! I'm not a huge poetry buff, but I adore this!

Aw! Broken hearts suck :(, but this story doesn't! I like the story, but it was pretty choppy and sometimes confusing. Examples: I had said hi after that he had ...

Hey guitargirl! I quite enjoyed this piece. There are a few things I would like to point out that would make it better though. Leaves crunched under my Converse sneakers ...

Woah woah woah! Slow down! You just spit four chapters worth of story into one paragraph! I think I got whip-lash. Other than the multitude of spelling and grammar mistakes, ...

Hello wickedwonder! This story was nice and casual. Short but good. If you wanted to make it great you could have thrown in some anecdotes about the MC's life and ...

Hey Megsug! I thought this short story was very good! It was surprising when the wife didn't feel any pain for her husband's death and I loved it. Even though ...

Holy Mussolini, I wish I could write like this in a red bull powered tizzy! I loved every line of this. I ate it up like a pancake breakfast and ...

All I have to say is, I'm in love with this.