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Wow rots, this was very enjoyable! I don't really have any critiques because I am not familiar with this style of writing, but I just wanted to tell you that ...

This is very bizarre, that's for sure! The lines are neat and well done, which is key to making a drawing look clean. I think the tail and the things ...

Hey Allie, I'm going to review your piece! :> Corrections/suggestions in red . Preface Sometimes you just know when you're in love. It's hard to explain how you know. It's ...

Hey Chryssa, review time! Comments/corrections in red . Her eyes flashed red in the darkness. Her nails lengthened and her mouth formed a muzzle. She felt the prickle of fur ...

Hello Angels-Symphony! I'm here to review! So first of all, I think your writing style is simply beautiful . This part especially: No birds sing in the silence. Only the ...

Hi paperback! Welcome to YWS! Comments in red . How long have you been asleep? What time was it? The red glare of the clock blinks 7:42. You groan. You ...

Hi mhutch, welcome to YWS! brought into this world by to loving, caring parents. Should be "two", not "to" There isn't much I have to say about this, it's pretty ...

Ignore the camera that the good fellow is offering to you and instead take a good stare into the depth of his eyes. Don’t allow your mouth to utter a ...

I don't know hardly anything about photography, but I really like these!

Sure, it could definitely work as a prologue. Good idea! Sorry about my rambling, I didn't mean to confuse you or offend you! I really did like your story, I ...

Hey dani, corrections in Red ! Chapter 1. – Exiled A flash, whiteness, blurr ed edges. A white dove on the balcony. A raven flies descends upon it . They ...

Hey Yuriiko! I've got some critiques for you. ;) Corrections in Red Your heart is beating fast. Goosebumps start to send chills all over your body but it isn’t the ...

This idea isn't unique or original at all, but somehow I couldn't stop reading! You made it so relate-able. Any girl (or boy) knows what it feels like to have ...

This is perfect! Exactly what I'm looking for! And yes, the story will be modern. Thanks so much!

Thanks for the advice!