LastPaladin

Known for associating her reviewing to an active Volcano.

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I honestly agree and it's because people don't understand how much commitment you need in them. They think half assed posts are perfectly fine. I even try to make rules ...

Hi all! So this is my attempt at another person. It's a female actress... I spent a little longer on this one and want to see if anyone can guess ...

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Paul – His House – Day 26: 5:30pm It came as no surprise to Paul that Gatlin was dead, and he felt nothing, no anger no sadness. Nothing was the ...

Eleora - Radiantella Falls The time for action for now, she told herself, halting her harp playing, she stood up, her long white hair, swaying. It had been five moons ...

Hayden MacQuinn – Outer Space: 1430 Awake he felt sweat falling from brow; he forgot he was even in the hard leather seat, until his vision righted itself. Staring out ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer, this here just blasts 'show don't tell' to the moon of all places. As you begin rather haphazardly with a cliche line ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer. I'm going to first some advice here that could be be considered a poem should have more than sweetness, it should have ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'm here to review your piece. To begin with it was a valiant effort, much like the Captain's but my main reason for disliking this is ...

I'm writing a story set in WW2. It's going to involve military experiments turning people into monsters (stronger weapon) on both sides. My problem is that I can't think of ...

You know you're a nerd when you spend most ya time on facebook and if ya own a camera ya take it seriously and begin to criticize photos you see ...

I wrote this in fit of anger, but found it quite depressing. Anyway here it is. ****** A statue stands high as can be, outshining stars, and comets as far ...

Hayden MacQuinn: Dreamland – Time Unknown Being back in Ireland was so great; the ‘Local’ was still as he remembered it, Meg was still a mystery within a mystery and ...